When I feel the wind pick up it's breeze
I try to visualize your face, and frame
I can send love's Ode to you, if you please
On the wings of the Wind that whispers your name
May you hear my voice as I say I love you
May you feel my arms hold you so tight
Let the Wind carry all my love so true
As it enfolds you all through the night
Kisses and Hugs all sprinkled with Stardust
My body's warmth is felt in the Wind
My footsteps come running, to find you I must
For our life together is about to begin
So stand on the hill as the wind passes by
Feel all I have said, catch hold of it true
My love covers you full and complete, as I cry
My Darling, My Love let me lie down next to you
-Katie Lazette-7:45 P M
Author notes
This is a pre written poem. I had this in another file and copied and pasted it in the new poem section.I chose picture #7 with the two wind faces. I don't know how to add it to the poem.
A contest entry
- PIX, PIX, PIX. by piccola.
450 points, ended February 2, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What is Love? by Cyprien.
550 points, ended September 7, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I felt a sense of peace when I read this poem. An assurance of hopeful feelings in every lover's heart. A very warm poem. Thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck.
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hi i thought this was very emotional and a very powerful write loved the way it give you an image of something beautiful and loved the title
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A powerfully emotional write. I loved it I saw the visual in my head as I read this poem and it was such a beautiful thing to see. Excellent write Katie! Peace, JT
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Such a creative and very emotional write. You have painted such a wonderful picture for all to see. Excellent poem
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WOW! -- stunningly beautiful... it's been a long time since I've seen something with such great imagery.... best of luck, ma chere
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maybe drag and copy it to your desk top then add it. I know which pick you mean...thanks for the entry.
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