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~~ Socks The Abused Kitten~~

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She was a miserable tiny kitten
Looking for a friend
Almost starved and mewling
In the cold March wind,
"I don't like cats" I told myself
But a little milk i will spare,
I'll give her shelter for the night
She can sleep in a box
On the stairs~

An unexpected snow fell
I had no heart to push her from her bed
A few more days would do no harm
At least that's what I said,
And sure enough no harm was done
To squirrels. birds, owner either,
Except eating my words~

She answers to the name of Socks
And sleep where she pleases,
Under a shrub outside
Or a quilt that gives her such ease
She's given more than she has took
By love that's plain to see
And life since Socks has came to stay
Is the only one for me~

Author notes

I actually love cats have had several Siamese and Persian
This is just a poem but I don't like abuse of any kind to animals....Also my first background ever i finally learned LOL

Written June 10th, 2003

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  • Candy6
    July 18, 2007
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    A great write. The cat is cute. I am cat lover! I have 2 cats named Maggie and Smokey, and they are my best furry friends. I am very gentle to all animals.

  • Willow
    July 4, 2004
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    From one animal lover to another....this was purrrrrfect. And you know how many furry or feathered friends I have! LOL Great poem sis. I just loved it.

    Love,
    ~ Sally ~

  • Odyssey
    July 19, 2003
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    That picture is SO cute, awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. pour liddle ting!

    Our next door neighbour had a cat named Socks when we were growing up. He was a big fat thing with very soft fur and a pudgy face. Kinda ugly cute.


  • NeverBeTheSame
    June 25, 2003
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    I love kitties so much this is os sweet and adorable pls return the favor

  • brokencrayon
    June 19, 2003
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    pitter patter of pink-soft paws. the gentle smattering of sweet, touching words. a wonderful progression from skeptic to softie! your experience with cats reminds me of me!

  • -Dawn-
    June 14, 2003
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    Awwww tis so sweet that you took that little sweetie in Susan...I hate to see any animal hurt or caged up or just sad

    This was a sweet poem Susan I loved the pic and YAY you learned backgrounds too


    ~~Dawn


  • June 13, 2003
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    awww, more kitties like that need more people like you =)
    a very nice, heartwarming poem.


  • Sprite silver member
    June 13, 2003
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    SOmehow I guessed the ending. Maybe the pic gave it away?? Lol. This is nicely written and I love the sweetness of the growing love.

  • SeanMorin
    June 13, 2003
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    I love cats, this poem gave me warm fuzzies. The picture was just adorable. Very nice poem, great work. Keep on writing!
    -Sean-


  • AzulKatze
    June 13, 2003
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    nice background first of all...
    and second of all....
    AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
    i hate to see animals abused, animals of any kind! i agre with bluegreenwaters, im such a sucker for things like that.
    great story to share with people, i hope socks brings you many blessings!
    *~!)o(Azul Corte Katze)o(!~*


  • Sunkissedrose
    June 11, 2003
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    This was good, and I loved the background, plus the picture> I am a sucker for hurt and lonely animals, However, I do have a poodle that is looking for a free home..lol
    Carrie


  • Rose Patrick
    June 11, 2003
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    This was so very good it just go to show how good hearted that you realy are. Ireally enjoy this poem of your. i thank you for shareing it


  • Maureen silver member
    June 11, 2003
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    You KNOW I LOVE cats, especially KITTENS!! Sis, you write 'em faster than I can read 'em! lol Love your poem and your background! Congratulations...I'm looking forward to seeing whatever you come up with...your pics' are always a treat for the eyes.


    Luv Ya!
    < 3 Maureen


  • Sherry gold member
    June 11, 2003
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    A heart warming read Susan.....Congratulations on the background thingy.....I tried help but you did it yourself good job. Sherry


  • AnnD Moderators member
    June 11, 2003
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    AAwwwwww..this is so sweet Susan...I adore cats...
    Started off with one....then had another till i had FOUR...
    THEN....silly me..forgot one of them was a female....and suddenly we had ANOTHER four in the house. sheeesh.
    It was fun while it lasted.....but we are back down to only two now..but i am a sucker for cats and kittens.

    Loved your write.

    Ann


  • Redstormy gold member
    June 11, 2003
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    lol Susan I have to smile you sure love yellow don't you! That kitten is adorable, a little pathetic but cute. I agree animals need to be cared for. This is a lovely write.

    Red


  • Kalexi
    June 11, 2003
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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, sweet write, Susan:) Was that your kitty in the pic?? I know cats hate baths,

    Did you make this background? It is really groovy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love ya,

    Karen


  • Ocean Gypsy silver member
    June 11, 2003
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    Aww, geez, where did you get that picture, it is so sad...;(

    I hate any type of abuse and animal abuse is about one of the worst.
    Makes me sick to my stomach...
    Good write tho, and yay you can do backgrounds now...

    Hugs.....~ Ce

  • Eternal Peace
    June 11, 2003
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    That is the cutest little picture..and that cat looks so adorable! This is a beautifully written poem. I enjoyed reading this. Write on
    † Eternal


  • Celticmoon
    June 10, 2003
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    Ok first of all I must say I'm a sucker for a cat.I lvoe them to death adn if I could have as many as I want I'd need a farm of 500 acres........lol

    Ok back to the poem at hand......I found it sweet and truly lovingly written.A true exspression of love as such for a friend,yes I said friend, Is a touching moment in even the darkest of the dark hearts and the coldest of cold hearts. Great Write!


  • symitar Moderators member
    June 10, 2003
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    Susan, what a touching poem. I am not a cat lover, but my daughter has had some very sweet cats. I still don't want one, but I can't help but grin when I see a itty bitty kitty. Great write, sounds like you two were meant for each other!


  • Danna Hobart
    June 10, 2003
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    Very cool back ground, Susan... I think I could stare at those colors all night.

    The poem is precious. I am sure that it is a story that has happened many, many times... those little critters will get under your skin.

  • Irridescent
    June 10, 2003
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    aww, poor poor kitty kitty...lol, kittens are cute but when they get older they become lazy and fat...lmao, this was cute and i loved it!!
    ~*Lynn*~


  • FormerlySaffron
    June 10, 2003
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    Awww... this is great. Love the pic. My 8 year old
    daughter will just love this. Actually both our cats
    were strays. This piece is so Cute !!!! BTW... thanks
    for your recent comment.

    Plz continue to share !!!

    Wanda


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 10, 2003
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    This is great. I love cats as well. I'm allergic to them though it doens't stop me from petting every one I see and then suffering itchy eyes for it LOL. I love them. Animals should never be abused, they are wondreful gifts of life. They should be respected and cared for. Awesome werite hun. Blessed be


  • hartofsilver
    June 10, 2003
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    oh my gosh, so heartwarming, sweet, happy, adorable, hopeful, so many things:) susan this was great! I loved it:)

    socks is a cute name, my cat's name is Jamal, and she's a girl tortoise shell kitty just about 2 years old (she came with the name:P)

    kayla*


  • Morrowind
    June 10, 2003
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    Such a Sweet poem Susan~
    i have a stray that came into my
    life on my Birthday 4 years ago
    And She has taking over the house!!LOL
    She's such a ham and she knows that she is loved
    Love this poem Hon* What would we do without them ?
    All the unconditional love they give Us
    The poem and picture is just Precious!
    Another wonderful poem from You hon* *Adorable*
    Great job on this Sweety! Love~Mina

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