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I vow:
no drugs
no alcohol
no pre-marital sex
no smoking

I promise:
no lies
no false impressions
no hypocrisy
no worthless anger

These are my vows and promises

to become happy once more

for I fear

I have lost

what once was

the real Meena

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 8, 2007

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    Beautiful thoughts and promises for a brighter future. It may not be easy at first and you mat feel discourageds at times, but hang in there and remember in ever step back there are two forward. You are a beautiful person and need to find your peace so your beauty can shine again.
    Best to you all the way!


  • Melodies
    February 2, 2007

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    Beautiful thoughts and promises!

    I could not be happier! Right choices bring happiness and peace of mind. I am so glad you posted this lovely poem, Amanda.


  • Vampyric Rogue
    January 31, 2007
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    Applauds

    great promises and vows. Everything will be worth it in the end. great write.