When I look in the mirror
Whose face do I see?
That tattooed black haired girl
Can not be me
Brown eyes wet with tears
Vodka on my breath
Random thoughts of suicide
And other people’s death
Marijuana in my blood
Fear on my face
Its bad, but feels so good
To be stuck with this fate
Author notes
just a little insight on my new and not improved life.
dont worry,i'm not seriously thinking about harming myself,its just a random thought.
Please tell me what you think
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this is deep but i am glade that this is not how you truly feel,just thoughts but be care full thoughts and feeling are a tight rope
very well penned
~liz~
BB
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Sweet
Hey, I've been taking a break from poetry to find my muse but I am back now, just thought I'd check out some of your new stuff. its great. i hope your well.
Tim aka Childofthenight
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wow~!
This was a VERY powerful write...yeah it's been long hey! but excellent as always!
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OMFG!
HEY! Long time no talk! This poem was really good. And I love the background. Where did you get it? I hope certain facts in this poem are not real. Like the whole deal about Marijuana in the blood. Since when girl!? Sine when!? And since when did you start drinking!? My god girl, first you don't come on and post anything for a long time and now this! But other than all those things it really was a great poem. Oh and I hope you and Hobbit work out better then you and fat boi! I really hope I hear from you soon. But that's enough long talk. Write back! LYLAS, TTFN, PABB.
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hey chris,actually it is true thats why i wrote it,but not anymore,i'm doing better...i hope
anyways...dont call him that james was sweet just i dont know too immature for me.but yeah hobbit and i are doing good,glad you liked the poem
as for the background i found it on here under where i usually get mine.
ttyl peace
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