Like a song unsung,
like never written words,
like a never painted picture...
and like a newborn stream
words of love are flying tied to invisible cords
colliding into each other like soft crystal marbles.
Close your eyes, slowly, under my touch,
I will draw a new, never drawn line following your brow
down to ear and neck
and your arm... next to the invisible scar.
Shhhhhhhh... don't peek...
You don't need to see, feel my palm
and tips of my fingers sliding down your chest.
My hair on your shoulder tickles the edge of your lips
inviting your tongue to act like a delicate rebel.
You move with no words,
looking at me no more surprised
trying to recognize many different pieces of sparkling stars
in my eyes.
Your hand on my heart...
your breath infuses into me new life...
And new buttons capitulate.
In a list
A contest entry
- Twin Souls by Regretlove.
450 points, ended February 13, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Looking For Crickets by Celticmoon.
1500 points, ended July 15, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very beautiful penning, the tenderness in your words is heartfelt and inspiring, not to mention it's sensual undertones. Very well done.
Rory
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Sonja,
The soft delicate touch of your quill upon this page is lovely. You left me wanting to dive within your words, longing to part take in all you have shown here. This is truly extrodinary! Bravo! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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here you go again with a composition of “several poems” blended into one complex work of art. there is description, dialog, mirth (the shhhh part and the buttons part), innovation (the line drawing – is it a life line), and yet end to end it is a serious poem about (of course) love. it is worth my four applauses
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Thank you for comment and applauses. It is interesting how my buttons are able to keep readers attention, lol. Yes, it is like a patchwork of several different shapes, and, as you noticed, it works.
And, yes, of course it is about love.
~Sonja~
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What a sensual write, so much visual yet a lot to the readers imagination, I read this three times and it was just as good the last read as the first. A splendid write indeed!
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Thank you Suzi for so nice comment and applause. I am glad that you could read it three times...
~Sonja~
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Beautiful
Great Job Sonja
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Thank you Valerie. I am gad you like it.
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Promise...sing
"I will draw "...."recognize many different pieces of sparkling stars" - summarizes Sonja's unique talent !
one question for the last line ...
And new buttons capitulate
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All buttons burst ?
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Great fun
You are quite the sensual writer Sonja. Very nicely done with class.
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Thank you Jim. I am just me. Always the same.
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SO VERY LOVELY!!!!
Very heart-felt words, tender caring and softly sweet.
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truly breathtaking!
good luck in the winning -
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Hi Cherokee! Welcome to my site of poetry. Thanks for a comment what speak so much.
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Beautiful imagery. It really touched me. Thank you for entering.
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The best comments always has less words than usal. thank you.
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