lovers interlace
hot tongues darting fervently
impassioned candles
Author notes
5-7-5 senryu. candlelight and lovers are quite similiar i think.
A contest entry
- 15 minutes - 3 by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended January 31, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very clever metaphor, not to mention imagery!
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I can picture the flames flickering as tongues would. Very clever indeed. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Impassioned is precise. Beautiful.
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oooo baby!
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