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Go To Hell...

Each day goes by,
Nothing ever changes,
I'm fucking sick of all this shit,
This keeps taring me apart.
Why must my past hold me back..
From all that could be in store.

I've lived my whole life in pain,
Dwelling on the past,
And all that has happened to me.
Got taken for granted and pushed aside,
Fucked up and screwed around.
Never been cared for or even really loved.

I put up with it for way to long,
Cared and loved for no reason at all.
I never got anything in return,
But hurt and shit thrown in my face.

This is a cruel cruel fucking world.
Why do any of us belong here or even exist?
No one is ever truley happy in the end.
We should just all end our lives,
Spend the rest of eternity in hell.
Maybe then, you'll live your life close,
To what mine has been lived.

No one cares for anyone at all,
There is too much hate in this world,
Too much pride and selfishness.
Everyone lives for themselves and no one else.
Lets just give up and go to hell.

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  • angelsslayer
    February 15, 2007
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    Well written

    captivating write. Truthfull poem, full of passion and power. Well written


  • Twilight Walker
    January 31, 2007
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    i'm scared i feel a tremble with each sentence that i read.... all these happened to me...wow...i'm speechless... it seems as i had written this one...nothing else...wow you took my breath.... awesome work

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 31, 2007
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    A very conscious rant. Hope all is well now.


  • Taylors girl
    January 31, 2007
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    wow, I liek the message...very amazing. simply loved it XOXO


  • darkheart76
    January 31, 2007
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    great

  • darkheart76
    January 31, 2007

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    great

    wow i've felt those emotions before
    but i remember when i do that every ending is a new begining that's my reason to hold on when being my whole life has been hell

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