Grow wings, break surf, and soar,
Above the restless mass that shimmers,
Liquid beauty.
Skip waves, and scatter diamonds in your wake,
Feel dying sun caress as you descend,
Enchantment of delight.
Chatter joy, untainted natures tune,
Melody that rises, echoes, fades,
Beck’ning horizon calls.
A contest entry
- 15 minutes - 3 by Melissa Gayle.
300 points, ended January 31, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is such a beautiful poem. I really like the way you describe the dolphin. And the background is so beautiful. I love sunsets. This is an awesome poem!!!
P.S. I wish I could give applause but I am out of free ones and I only have 23 points. But I sill like it. 2 thumbs up from me. -
Small, concise and perfect.
Blessed Be
Allura
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Wonderfully expressed and written
Wow so well written in just a few minutes. Your talent shines. Your words flowed so wonderfully. I enjoyed it very much. (Lisa)
"Skip waves, and scatter diamonds in your wake,
Feel dying sun caress as you descend,
Enchantment of delight."
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This is a lovely collage of imagery, very well written in only fifteen minutes!? I like it alot, very good.
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A beautiful snippet.
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Lovely presentation on this page - all this in just 15 minutes - wow. I'm always in too much of a rush to even add a background - but it sure does add to the page! Lovely write too.
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dynamic, with high energy
The dolphins come to life, become real for us. Skillful use of the form and stanzas, with great images matching the subject.
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cool.
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