the sun bleeds pink
into a golden horizon
through a purple barricade
and seeps into lingering blue
to chase away Midnight's cover
and whisper warms secrets
to the naked giants
standing with feet in frozen shoes
buried under a yellowing rug
that rots like a festering secret
beneath a shimmering facade
of perfect wonder
which it melts
with a kiss
and dresses the fragile giants
in royal green robes
and coaxes to life
a lush green carpet to match
a new and beautiful truth
that destroys itself in time.
Please tell me what you think
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a new and beautiful truth
that destroys itself in time- This part is my favourite, it's put really well and is the perfevt ending, This is a really good piece of writing. xxxx
Keep it up
hananh

