Can you make it through another day
Will tomorrow be just as bad
As today
Oh, I don't know
But these are my thoughts
While laying awake
Watching the night pass me by
Will they remember you
Will they forget
Did you make a difference to them
Well it doesn't matter
Even with these thoughts in my head
Cause just for tonight it's them I'll forget
Did you love him well
Are they living right
I think so and that's okay
Cause after all these years
I can deal with them
After all they are
Just thoughts in my head
Author notes
Um..this is suppose to be in three different stages... the child, the teen leaving highschool, and the adult.
Please tell me what you think
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Great poem i loved the ending, this poem is really gripping and keeps you interested it was written really well, and it's a great subject area...I really liked it.
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Love, Hannah
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the ending was my favorate, it is something that brings it all togehter, just holds it together like glue, but not sticky or tacky... still furthermore i beleave many people can relate whcih will give it more add ons.
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