I am virtually yours
You ended your IM with a new phrase
something odd, electronic single praise.
Electrons float through online streams of space
and quickly show up as poetic taste.
Magnetic attraction like the moons pull
so true I cannot ignore it or fool
since what existed not just yesterday
is now empowered by love's deepest sway.
My fingertips jump with joy to now write
and my soul entranced I no longer fight.
For me, I follow your electronic tour.
I agree I am virtually yours.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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Dear
Thank you for you love honesty and you said, " The answer is yes. Yes. I will be yours in whatever capacity you need me to be yours. I will be your best friend. I will be your confidant. I will be yours. I will be anything you ask or need me to be. YES.
I am already yours ."
Ditto
My Pledge
I, Mr. Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari, pledge my Foundation to halt child slavery activities including my charity, the Global Peace Film Festival, Inc., at www.peacefilmfest.org. I pledge moral support of legal, peaceful activities and my non-profit gifts offshore, onshore and globally, primarily with philanthropy from my personal investment to help halt all fraud, violence and scams hurting innocent children, women and families so help me God.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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Dude this is so good its virtually unbelievable and yet it fits in so well with the times that we find ourselves. I'm sending you electronic applause for this one
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This was amazing. The rhyme scheme was flawless, the content was beautiful and full of passion, and the picture fit so well into the topic. thank you so much for giving me the privilege of reading this. Blessed be.
Lizzy
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NICE
I sooooo enjoyed reading and being able to comment on your awesome pennings!!!!!!!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
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Beautiful statement of love and devotion in this piece..It flows over the brim with both..
Take care...Dusty
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No criticism dwells on these lips for as I sigh I listen to the words of love blooming, electrical storm is resonating in this. *Sigh I do so love happy endings
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*wildly applaudes*
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Online love. This is nicely done, though I'm not sure an absolutely flawless sonnet. The syllable count seems to vary line to line. I definently loved the ending though. Clever.
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Thank you for that advice
I corrected the beat
so that its ten
by love that feat
was inspired by friends.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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*sighs happily now that all is well with my ever-growing family and starts to think about weddings and grandshildren with a sly smile, hehe*
One note on the poem itself, you might want to capitilize IM to make it easily recognizable as such and not I'm improperly written.
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Good advice I think and im is now IM...
Aren't these times strange
as virtual family's explore
transcending our ages range
mother-in-law of my adore.
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you can't criticize THIS...lol -
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LOL not a criticism, merely a suggestion to make this read as wonderful as as it can!!
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Virtually yours...
I accept your ditto with pure bliss
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