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Snapshot


Hunger
craves infanticide -
those tiny, speckled dots
that form from worms,
inwombs,
inside.

Tingling,
excitement creeps -
as tadpoles change
into frogfooted
embryos.

Growing,
throwing up -
a pain just visiting
that goes on for
forever.
And that question,
"Abortion?"
sours the taste on my
tongue.

Just
k i c k i n g
to be alive -
no longer able to be
ignored.

Then
she emerges,
the black and white screen
curling, swimming,
ahead.

Photos,
are nothing compared to
Life is not a snapshot
on a screen - so much
more.

Birth
Quite the opposite of
infanticide.
A hunger
saturated
by the pulling
pushing, tugging,
screaming agony
outside -

And this dot becomes reality.

The Ward;

no longer black-and-white

but a multiccoloured museum

of semi grown

dots, just waiting to

Dilate.

Whatever

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  • Ithica silver member
    October 7, 2007
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    I agree...

    this is very unusual metaphor. But I do get it. It kind of hits upon that age old question of when life actually begins, and metaphor is required since as far as I know "nobody" has been able to communicate with an embreyo... yet! And you follow all the way through to the moment of birth. It is definately one cool poem... Ithica


  • shytala
    October 7, 2007
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    I love it...


  • LadyUnique silver member
    October 7, 2007

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    very interesting write. i've read this a few times and like it more each time.
    your style is unique... nurture it