Let me tell you
The story of a man
Who's life was filled with such horrific acts
That some kill themselves
Upon hearing what he did...
Just let me forewarn you
His tale
Is not for the faint-hearted...
As a child
He was brought up in a family
That treated him most terribly
Because he did not share their Christian beliefs.
By the age of 13 he had ran away and used a gun...
Six times...
He killed his mom
He killed his dad
He killed his 17 year old sister
He killed his 15 year old sister
He killed the priest at his church
And he even shot and killed...
His 5 year old younger brother...
He ran away
And no one could find him...
He tracked down at this age
Girls of the ages of 10-13
And overpowered them
And raped them.
He crossed state borders as he evaded those
Who tried to track him down...
He worshipped Satan
And burned Crosses and spit at churches.
Some say they saw a dark aura surrounding him
So they were afraid to report him
Fearing he would know it was them...
By the age of 16
He had traveled several thousand miles across the country
Evading all who tried to catch him.
At this age
He was now much stronger
And simply grabbed girls and took them away...
He did such horrifying things
That some could just see it in him
Pure darkness...
At age 17
He was raping girls ages 10 and up to their early 20s...
He was getting himself a reputation
But only he knew of it...
No girls knew of it...
They all saw a guy who was appealing
But when he had them away from the public
He did his duty that Satan gave him...
He began to kill more
And kidnap...
Those girls who were too difficult for him to keep and hide to rape whenever he wanted
He would brutally kill them...
I shall tell you how
For it was of no normal murderer's way...
In the process of raping them
He would take their throat in his teeth
And bite down...
Girls screamed
Birds flew away
Even the black crows...
He gripped onto their wrists so tight
It hurt more than usual because he used razors to make cuts into girls arms and chests...
Those points where he would grip
And later drain the blood out and drink it all...
Yes...
That is how he would kill those he could not keep...
Those who did not just remain quiet and pray that it would end soon...
Even though it would never really seem to end...
His life would continue on like this...
For he was an incarnate of one of Satan's angels...
He was a demon...
A demon bent on rape
Murder
Destruction
And total blasphemy.
Author notes
Well... haha, I dunno, I think a write I did awhile ago for a different contest was a bit better, the name of that poem if you are interested is, "His Life... Forever Changed." Some people said it was the darkest poem they had ever read on allpoetry!!
A contest entry
- The Darkest Day by Baahltres.
2000 points, ended February 13, 2007, 33 entries
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This is scary and very dark but I like it...it's sick and weird but clever
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uhh...
Wow. this is...wow! lol. I'd hate to run into that guy, seeing that i'm a girl too! haha! :-P
but yah..nice job, very creepy, hahaha! ne who, Great!
thanks for the comments, again.
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So dark
Darkness so intriguing, amazing, I couldn't look away. Each poem of yours is so different. It's amazing how one lone poet can make so many different feelings comee out of his writing. I envy you.
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WOW
that braught me to tears. such hate and such i dont know what. its so sad that there really ARE people in this world like that. its so sad. sometimes i think of a my friend who died from some freak like that and i just get so angrey and so hurt i dont know what to do this poem spoke to me it was amazing and soo deep you did a great job showing the evil in people who live there lives this way. amazing job once again.
♥sam
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Oh yes. blod, flesh, death and destruction. i love it and i think i jus fell in love with your writting.well done and im taking it as you love these things. i do i enjoy watching it happen to inocent peopl. lmao. but hey, it is fun. great write and keep up the amazing work...
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lol
well, believe it or not, I actually don't like watching this happen to people! >.<
I just happen to be good at writing dark pieces! lol!!!
-Alex
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Well, I thought this was fairly well written. Although, I think you made the hype about how bad this guy was bigger than you made his evils seem. Somehow, what he did to those girls wasn't written in a way that made them seem horrible, maybe because you made them seem like so much of a regular, everyday activity for him. Well done!
Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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Is that good?
idk, you might like my older poem, "His Life... Forever Chaged" more...
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Mummmmy!!! This evil guy is writing very evil poems! lol
Very wicked! And bloody dark!
That sounds like a serial killer but with that ending he is a demonic serial killer!
You could do a part two of how somebody tries to stop him (like another jealous demon or someone who is good and with some power or something) lol
Anyways, I liked reading this, gave me goosebumps!
So keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
Nooni
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personally i think this is the darkest and scariest poem i have ever read on allpoetry, omg! this was so spine chilling, i almost couldn't finish reading it. it made my stomach curl up and tighten up, my hairs were standing on edge, totally wicked, scary, and twisted, great write, if you freaked oka out this poem rocks out loud >.<
~Oka
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