I awoke in a room
That was dark and cold
I looked at the walls
And saw they had mold
I don’t know how long
I had been down in that place
I thought to myself
This doesn’t feel safe
My eyes saw a glimpse
Of a silvery shine
I knew right away
It was a huge knife
I saw from behind it
That something had stirred
Last thing I knew
Things started to blur
I began to panic
I had no clue what to do
I had no kind of weapons
So I took off my shoes
I couldn’t do much
But given the chance
I throw both my shoes
And then I just ran
I heard something behind me
It wasn’t humane
I just kept on running
Like someone insane
I tripped and I fell
My hand hit a nail
It throbbed and it ached
I was in so much pain
Then I saw the eyes
Of my chaser before
They were a darkened yellow
And I was caught it the horror
It jumped on my back
And bit off my ear
My eyes started to water
Then I let out the tears
I jerked and I fought
It’s balance it lost
I pushed it aside
Then prepared for the ride
I screamed
And it shrieked
It’s end it would meet
I ran back to the room
Where I first saw the knife
I knew what to do
And didn’t want to die
I knew it had followed me
But it was too dark for me to see
Something caught me from behind
I screamed and jerked
And slid the knife
It cut real deep
Into some flesh
I knew right then
It met it's match
I cleaned the knife
And limped away
I heard the creature
Shriek in pain
It couldn't move
I cut half it's head
It lost so much blood
And soon would be dead
I grinned to myself
I knew I had won
I had to admit
It was kind of fun
I limped my way out
Of that cold, scary place
I woke up and found
It was a dream
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Dark, Twisted, Scary,
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Whew, what a dream, ....er... nightmare, holy crap,
thanks for entering and good luck.
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NICE!!!
WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Go flow and it grabed me. Really I wanted more. What a good story and so well put. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
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Wow this is great....how did you come up wiht this?I really liked it...No I loved it!Keep up the good work!
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Wow...
You ACTUALLY had this dream?!
Holy crap!!!
That is one freaky dream for sure!!! DEFINITELY scary!!! I am not sure what to say other than, you had me, and now I got to let out a sigh of relief to find this was a dream, but my god! Scary! Good luck and great job!!!
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Dark twisted and scary is right, Very well written, I was kinda scared. I'm goin to have to work on getting writting more positive and happy things. By the way I am still hiding!LOL
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