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In my dream, a question?

In my dream, a question?

In dreams of fantastic reality
where words bloom unfair dualities
where up and down are found clowning around
and flowers from tears of dew so confound.
You offer nectar and morning glory
Your petals embracing magic stories.
Shivering in the wind, your beauty stands true
each day your velvetine touch grows brand new.
I reach down and pluck you from the lush ground
tearing your soul as I possess once found.
I thought it over since I really care
fearing that in life my feelings will tear.
Despite life's imperfection, love is sublime
and my dream in this life; will you be mine?

Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

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Dear

God is good to make such dreams dear as prophesy and to know even in my mind such glory is near.

My Pledge

I, Mr. Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari, pledge my Foundation to halt child slavery activities including my charity, the Global Peace Film Festival, Inc., at www.peacefilmfest.org. I pledge moral support of legal, peaceful activities and my non-profit gifts offshore, onshore and globally, primarily with philanthropy from my personal investment to help halt all fraud, violence and scams hurting innocent children, women and families so help me God.

Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

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  • Dusty Rose
    January 31, 2007
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    Lovely...I wish all this happiness and love...And then some more..

    Love..Dusty


  • Sonja silver member
    January 31, 2007

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    Hi AT! Recently it is a new "fashion" to stay with open mouth after reading somebodies poem. Where did your words came from??? Great.
    ~Sonja~


  • Lady-Pegasus
    January 31, 2007

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    If this is saying what I THINK ITS saying.... WOOOOHOOOO

    *does a silly dance and showers you both with rose petals*


  • tanzanite
    January 31, 2007

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    Oh yes God is good to grant us this love and the gift to be able to express it. I loved this piece and I always love seeing the word "velvetine" in any poem. Thank you for this beautiful piece.

  • JohnnyD gold member
    January 31, 2007

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    My brother

    I thought it over since I really care
    fearing that in life my feelings will tear.
    Despite life's imperfection, love is sublime
    and my special friend; will you be mine.

    I see you have rolled the dice. I am most happy. Most!

    My heart swells with great happiness over this for now one of us at least will have what we need. fate and God works in wonderful ways, wonderful indeed.

    peace and contentment to you and yours

    Len


  • Mandika silver member
    January 31, 2007

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    Awww...That's What I Like

    You relish these new found feelings you have and be happy in them. Everyone deserves to love and be happy in love. Love you guys.


    • Abdul T Alishtari
      January 31, 2007
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      Sister

      You are to be commended for being so sisterly, sweet and beautiful to the extreme but you know that.

      Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

  • Sacrificial Love
    January 31, 2007

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    So sweet...

    Your words could heal
    a million scarred souls.
    I know this because
    they are healing mine.


    • Abdul T Alishtari
      January 31, 2007
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      Joy and tears

      We are love buckets
      full of liquid goo
      swooshing around our duckets
      subsumed by passions too.

      Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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