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Asbestro Heart Strings.

Draw a line around myself to form the shape of another.
Tonight I wont be alone. Tonight I will be with my chalk line boy.
Carve a heart of stone and place it where it should have been.
Tonight I will make him love me. Tonight I will replace you.
My chalk line boy loves me unconditionally.
I place my hand on his chalk line hand and kiss his chalk line lips.
I picture your look in his chalk line eyes and stare into them for hours.
Tonight I dreamt you loved me again.

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  • grrlshadow
    March 13, 2007
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    "My chalk line boy loves me unconditionally" oh this is just sweet, but i LOVE the lines "Tonight I will make him love me. Tonight I will replace you." such lovely anger, like darts unerringly aimed...


  • February 11, 2007
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    woderful

    Tonight I will make him love me. Tonight I will replace you.

    was my favorite line.