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Love and Hate

You hate when I
Make you feel bad
I hate when you
Let me feel this way
My innermost thoughts
Carve your daylight surroundings
Words play like fallacies
In the super-conscience of your mind
Make me
Break me
You won’t take me
For who I am
Wander ‘round your filthy gulch
Pick a phrase from amidst the dust
Shake it off with trembling hand
You somehow always make me understand
Jagged tongue pierce my life
Hole so wide it can’t be fixed
Fall through to the other side
Found a place where I can hide
From you.

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  • fathasfeelings
    March 2, 2007

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    Sounds like you have been through quite a few life altering experiences... I'm sure those times have made you stronger though.