one slit
two slits
three slits
blood
the pain is harsh
like splitting wood
one drop
two drops
three drops
pain
red rushes down
like summer rain
one day
two days
three days
hate
it seems the cutting
is my only fate
SO>>>>>
One slit
two slits....................
Author notes
enjoy if you can
A contest entry
- The Darkest Day by Baahltres.
2000 points, ended February 13, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OOH! I love the, one slit two slit....etc. thing- a dark Dr. Suess. And the ending is great- so...one slit...perfect.
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Oops, I forgot to give you your applause! lol, have a great day!
~.~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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I like the simple pattern you put into this. It gives it almost a childish feel to it, even though hopefully a child will never be reciting this. Well done!
Thank you for entering and good luck!!!
~,~Yvonne~.~
Baahltres
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