things I couldn't say
every lie escalates into the riddling ridiculous:
behind that's the truth.
things you won't believe:
I know the greatest actor.
Things I never say:
Someone who sees all for who it is.
Some skills I will never relate,
come until my dying day-
and when you shake your head,
somehow,
is when you hear the truth.
Strangest gems
of utter insanity,
lively in their pride-
As a child I always wondered who to ask.
Animals know the world:
and respond with wit to simple thoughts.
So does
a stomach.
A short growl for yes,
long for no-
and everything in between.
Stomachs don't know too much.
A contest entry
- Post Secret::My Secret Inspired *Now Your SECRET!* by Dead Star--x.
350 points, ended February 14, 2007, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i do like this.. its like a metaphor for and eating disorder.. and that end line packs a punch to the gut.. and its true the stomach doesnt know anything its all about mind over matter,, out of sight out of mind... thanx for entering!
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sometimes I ask opinions of my body parts. I'm freaking nuts, but its fun.
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Hmmmm....this really made me think. I really liked the title it was really catchy. LoL "and when you shake your head,
somehow,
is when you hear the truth"
That was brilliant. I loved it. Bravo.
The only think I think you could improve is grammar but I'm just OCD about commas and periods and capitalization and stuff. Great job.
Love,
marisa
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