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Your Eyes

I am looking at you
as your eyes turn to me
But you caught my eyes
And try to turn away from me

Don't turn away
turn back and look this way
Let me Just stare into your eyes
And try to find the things you try to hide

I must admit
your look got me mesmerized
As I stare into those beautiful eyes
I think it's something called
love at first sight
I think I've fallen in love
Just looking into your eyes

Author notes

I don't know, the first thing I caught was her eyes, and the words just flew out

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  • W B Burkholder
    January 31, 2007
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    very very nice


  • Angierie
    January 31, 2007

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    Very good.. and cute.
    ~The winning poem has not yet been decided.. but I'll let you know when I make a decision. Thanks so much for entering!!
    Love, Angie