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I Love You More

I love you more than the moon loves the sky,
And if our love could grow wings,
it would fly twice as high.

I love you more than the sun loves its rays,
and to be happy, with you,
I'd spend all of my days.

I love you more than the sand beneath the seas,
and for you I'd be that sand,
so mold me thoroughly.

If our love could fill the oceans,
we'd have eternal bliss
and whoever swam in it would know your gentle kiss.

And I could drown forever in the deep pools of your love,
and fly, high and far, on the wings you gave, above
and look down at you
while you look up at me,
and in your eyes reflected
is all the
love and
life
we need.

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  • xxLet It Die
    January 30, 2007
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    awwwwwwwww this was adorable i loved it.
    You have a great piece right here.
    Thanks for sharing