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I know you are out there,
the mist has whispered your name
The waves caress the sand,
taking my messages of love
    out to sea




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  • crimsondew silver member
    December 19, 2007
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    Wow

    Very beautiful...love it!


  • darell silver member
    February 4, 2007
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    Beautiful!

    This was a warm and captivating poem.
    It was written with sensitivity and softness
    and mystique. I would love to see this poem
    continued. I believe you have a lot more to
    say on the subject. Great writing

  • Live4FandFs silver member
    February 1, 2007

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    Short with Depth

    It's such a delightful poem that is short and sweet and is complete. Hopeful & uplifting knowing that there is someone out there...beautiful words...Thanks for sharing...take care & God bless


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    January 31, 2007

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    This is a most captivating write full of beautiful emotion.
    Thank you for this entry and good luck to you in my contest
    Gaylene