This day that is so red
This day my heart turns to lead
I cannot bare the excluding image it sends forth
Only the beautiful people who have found love henceforth
It seems to be taunting me because I can't be apart of its scene
Because I am not worthy of love's presence so serene
I watch the chaos from within my deep dark haven
My lonely soul an outcast like the company of a raven
Call me morbid and pessimistic
But it is the truth, so realistic
So I say damn it all to the firey pits of hell
I'll just wait it out and wait in my desolate shell
A contest entry
- Anti-Valentine by Acronym.
625 points, ended February 6, 2007, 14 entries
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Short and simple. preferred longer ones but this is ok. I liked the following:
"I watch the chaos from within my deep dark haven
My lonely soul an outcast like the company of a raven
Call me morbid and pessimistic
But it is the truth, so realistic
So I say damn it all to the firey pits of hell
I'll just wait it out and wait in my desolate shell"
I just kinda wish it were longer, if ya want or if you can you may add more later on.
best of luck in the contest,
-Acronym
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Just for the head of this contest...
Dead 2 U
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