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Hello World, Meet Hope

Hope, a child;
everlasting smile.
Beaten; Bruised;
lost for a while.
Disappointed; Dismayed;
sometimes denial.

Broken; Gray;
fall to the floor.
Strength; Stand up;
muddy and sore.
Heal; Revive;
ready for more.

Herself, a hill;
high and low.
She lives, my heart;
ready to grow.
Hope, I pray,
the world may know.

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  • cordova
    February 1, 2007
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    nice poem

    cute poem , not sure what its about though??


    • Truthtomyheart
      February 1, 2007
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      describes hope as a little girl; saying that hope has its highs and lows but it gets bak up. saying hope lives in my heart and i hope to introduce hope to the world [no pun intended].


  • olympia
    January 31, 2007
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    It ends very suddenly But it is a very good poem I like it