Here I go again
with my stubborn independence.
It's happening again
with my nose in the air
and my hand letting go
and my feet too close to
the ground.
I keep tripping and falling
and I'm so tired of hitting
the ground.
So this time
I'm gonna reach for you.
This time
I'm gonna depend on you
'cause I know you'll
help me keep my feet on
the ground.
Author notes
Pretty self-explanatory; realizing I have Jesus and finally giving in to depending on him.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This illustrates EXACTLY how I feel... just don't tell my aunt and cousin. They'll never let me live it down, and they'll be all like "being forced to go to church did you some good", but that's not what did it...
Anyway, the structure of the poem was good, and the overall poem could signify many things, but it's spiritual to you and obviously means something special. Wonderful work
Cheers,
Coconut
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