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Lots of Rhyming

This world bends to my power
As I close the petals of the flower
Which holds my heart in this hour
This rose I hold out to you

The bloodless rose in your sight
You keep safe from the fright
As I try to prove to you my might
My illusion, which you look straight through

Your power bends my world I fear
If I ask, will you hold me near?
As I steal away your diamond tear
Will you give me your heart to?

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  • bleed-it-out
    February 1, 2007
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    i have always loved your poetry another greaaaat one!!!


  • Luthien Luinwe
    January 30, 2007
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    To you, my heart I shall give. Holding you near is a pleasure. Anything you ask of me, my love, you shall recieve. Wonderful poem. You are a natural when it comes to rhyming. lol! Love the imagery! Once again beautiful poem!