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A Bacchian Revelry

Dryads, fauns, and satyrs
cavort the night away
in a Dionysian fashion-
the streams flow wine,
the fire glows brightly,
one nymph plucks a grape and throws it into the mouth of a satyr.
The moon laughs and dances
as the gyrating shadows
undulate across the dancing lawn.
Pick up a drum and dance.

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good times

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  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    February 1, 2007

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    This poem is filled with some amazing fairytale imagery. Nice and clear and well written. I enjoyed this moment of escape

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary