You say don't walk away
Well you taught me how
All the thing's you never say
Won't phaze me now
I'm walking away today
Leaving with what's left of my heart
Questionaing why I played myself this way
Setting myself up to fall apart
Now I ask
How can I perform this task
Of moving on
When I know nothing
Except that your gone
You say dont close this door
Well you taught me how
Memories of blood on the floor
Now I know never to allow
People like you, in my life
You broke me so
That I led myself to believe a knife
Was a valid solution
Now I see
Your prescence was just pollution
To my unclear conscience, you controlled me
You say don't walk away
Well tell me, how can I stay
When you are the demon
Handing me the weapon each time...
A contest entry
- Pain, Without Love. by La Tua Cantante.
425 points, ended April 13, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
?
Comments
-
This is a very well written emotional poem. I know exactly how you feel. My favorite part would have to be,
"Your prescence was just pollution
To my unclear conscience, you controlled me"
This is an amazing poem, and I wish you good luck in my contest.
-La Tua.
-
Wow Amazing!!!!
This poem is so deep..i really like it alot..you have done a great job...im glad that you are ready to move on and leave him behind...i know its going to be a long hard bumpy road and there are gonna be times when you do want him back but dont worry girl those times will pass and you will be happy once again, i still go there too, feeling like i want my ex back cuz i miss him so, but then i realize everytime that all he will do is hurt me and i would be living a lie, you will find a guy that will make you happy and help you forget about him...
My favorite part of the poem is when you say
" You say don't walk away
Well tell me, how can I stay
When you are the demon
Handing the weapon each time..."
It is so inspirational...yet agian you have written a beautiful poem...oh and a friend of mine told me today to try and wright a happy poem and it might make me feel better and one day i can look back and smile...i think i will try it cuz you never know it might just be what i need...maybe it could help you too... Well take care
Melissa
-
-
thanks hunn. Yes...it was hard writing this poem though i msut admit. hmmm a happy poem? lol i dont think ive written a happy poem in my life. mine ar either on love, or pain and negativity and all that. i will try though and see what happens
one of the poets on AP suggested that i write a story/poem about like the whole thing. how it was how it is now exc. maybe that could help you....its really hard i must admit because i am in the process of writing the sotry and it hurts alot to let ignorance slide and relive all the memories...but thanks for telling me that i will try to write a happy one...:S hehe
take care
luv ya
Courtney
-
Adding your comment:
