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One Winged demon

A young blue eyed girl
With long silver hair
A face of an angel
But a demonic stare

A daughter of Jenova
Evil to the bone
She is extremely decieving
And always works alone

Character of a demon
The form on one too
Sephira the one winged demon
Means that trouble will brew

So for now Sephira is calm
But one day her time will come
When her brother calls out to her
A one winged demon she will become


Author notes

This is about my new RP character, Sephira. A one winged demon who is also a child of Hojo, and injected with Jenova cells. She is Clouds age and also carries a specialised swort known as Sephiras sabre. She has long silver hair, feathered with a fringeand wears a 1st class shinra uniform. She wears chains around her trousers, and bandages round her wrists. Her nails are claw like and painted red and black.

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  • Tarja
    September 28, 2007
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    Ohhh very interesting indeed. I'm not much into fanfiction but Sephira sounds like she would be an amazing character... but of course who wouldn't be if they're related to Sephiroth.
    I really love the description in this.. I can totally see her! Well done!


  • KenKen Emmerick
    February 12, 2007

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    I just love how you introduce her. I've always tried to do things like this, characters and things, but it never works for me. Maybe i could learn from you.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 30, 2007

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    hmmmmmmmmm, sweet, i can't wait til you start writing about her, cause i know you will not just leave us hanging, keep it flowing


    • 1-Winged-Angel
      January 31, 2007
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      Thanks. I'm glad you like it. I may do sonething with Sephira and Solo in the near future. We shall see


  • Falling Destiny
    January 30, 2007

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    Awsome description of her...very chaotic and dangerous personality and appearance..and I also just lovvee that RHYMING!!! it works really well!!!

    -Mina


  • Lucca
    January 30, 2007

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    that was veruy interesting and I liked the whole story you have with it also the rhyming wasnt just average words it was unique!

    • 1-Winged-Angel
      January 30, 2007
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      Thankyou . I'm glad you like it. I'm thinking about using her in RP. Not sure yet though. Thanks for commenting and applauding. I really appreciate it

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