A daughter is born
To a land a far
Love breathes undying
In that fairytale place
Take my hand
Close your eyes
If you hold on tight
I will take you there
Open the gateway
My friend
Pull back the blinds
Revealing the pathway
Into, all minds
Through hazel eyes
Do you now see?
This wondrous land
And the fruits it shall bear?
Many seeds have I sown
My friend, don’t mourn
A maiden is she now
That daughter once born
Beauty beyond compare
Radiant and shining
Like a gift some say
Unto our fairytale
A monster of eyes
Green and callous
Weaving eternal envy
Spreading nought but jealousy
The statues do weep
Tears of longing; of falling
Their emotion runs deep
For the maiden is calling
Come thee all
To my fairytale land
Lost forever
In paradise.
Author notes
illusion #2 hey i got no dragons but i do have a fairytale land, where all children are born twisted and evil, and possibly with only 3 fingers. . .
A contest entry
- Dark, Love, Fantasy? by --Beautiful--.
550 points, ended February 18, 2007, 31 entries
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Comments
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Very good..this is kinda creepy even though you picked #2...i don't know if you ment it ot be or not but ya... good job i like it...thank you for entering and goodluck
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aww that's cute, I don't really get it but then again I never understand your poems...but yeah it's good, you're quite the little writer aren't you :-) xxx
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Awh tis really cute and strangely happy for you...
Its like a summary of all fairytales, some jealous biatch tryna hurt the nice pretty gal.
Vicious things fairytales....
Love and such
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great write!!!
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