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My Friend

You picked me up when I was down
Helped me when I died inside
Gave me a better outlook
Held me when I cried

Been friends many years now
Always been there
Through thick and thin
Such friendship is rare

Seven long years
And now we are here

Here is where I want to be
Open, honest and laid bare
A place where I am me
Loving you

Creating a smile
Each and every day
Making me feel better
In every way

So here I am
Loving you

Author notes

yay im not dead on here
so heres a poem for yooo guys
and spesh davey

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  • neveralone09
    January 30, 2007

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    yay this is a sweet poem. I like the flow of it alot. It's anice write with a sweet (s in aw) tory. good job.
    neveralone09

  • shore-fire555
    January 30, 2007

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    seven long years being you best friend. . .hmmm its been great and the past four months being your boyfriend well you know how much i love you

  • shore-fire555
    January 30, 2007
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    :D

    great poem! love you sweetie. . .dave