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How Much

I can't explain how much I love you,
and you say you love me too.
But if that's true,
why do you say and do the things you do?

What did I ever do to you?
All I did was love you.
Was that so wrong?
You're making me weak when I'm not even strong.

Why do you treat me like this?
Why do you treat me so?
How much do you expect me to take?
Why must you keep treating me so low?

Do you enjoy seeing me in pain?
Have all my efforts beenin vain?
Are our feelings even still the same?

Have we lost everything we've gained?
Are you playing me like a game?
Do you like seeing my heart ache?

I don't know how much more I can take.
I feel like I'm about to break.
Have all your feelings been fake?
How much longer will I feel betrayed?

How much must you put me through?
I hope you make up your mind soon,
because my pain caused by you
is leading me to my doom.

Just a random poem that came to mind when inspiration struck.

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  • Melie
    February 4, 2007
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    aww.. I hope you're okay.. this is sad.. It sucks anyone ever needs to go through this. You just gotta be tough, you can do it! May take a while for your strength to build up..but it will! Just hang on


  • faderman1959
    January 30, 2007

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    This was sad angel! I was hoping to see a happy poem from you. Its been a long time since you have put word to page. Hang tough young lady!


    • aRdNeK
      February 19, 2007
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      Sorry about he long time it took to write back. I haven't been writing like I used to. I ran out of time and inspiration, what with work and new interests. hehehehe But yeah, tahnks for the comment and things are going great now.


  • princessarya
    January 30, 2007

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    yeah, i know this is about and ian. random, my frizzy hair! but i like it, it made me wanna cry. SMILE!