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Clever

Clever as a streetcar,
Thick and round,
Up and down,
What am i describing?

Open for some fun,
And really dumb,
thinking for itself,
Without any help?
(maybe not)

Without a degree,
And in a tree,
He Cries for help,
But he already fell,
Clever?

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Written June 10th, 2003

A contest entry

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  • AzulKatze
    June 18, 2003
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    ditto...
    dunno if it makes much sense....
    not too sure about this one.
    *~!)o(Azul Corte Katze)o(!~*

  • Night Fighter
    June 10, 2003
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    Thanx for submitting.

  • StarGrrl
    June 10, 2003
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    I dont know if it makes sense, so i think ill try again tommorrow.