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Nice a.s.s

Sitting at the bar sipping shot after shot,
A young legged blond woman walked through;
I couldn't tell if it was the shots
that blurred out my vision, but she looked good.
Gorgeous, perfect, like she recently had her surgery.

Tip toeing accross the floor I was.
She was sitting with four other lady friends
maybe they knew the owner or they had money.
They were in the V-I-P section, ballers I call them.
My eyes stayed fix on her, she had it bad.

Like a vulture seeing his prey;
I was in the attack mode.
Beautiful music, everyone was here to break a leg.
I was like a geek on the dance floor;
hoping she was looking at me,
I made sure I put out my best moves...

While dancing on the floor;
her eyes fell upon mine,
I smiled and signaled her with my finger to come.
She shook her head and said no;
too determined I was, I walked toward her
and asked her to dance.

She agreed, I took her hand
as she followed me to center stage.
She was a great dancer, better than I was.
I tried killing her with my words;
she could not help but smile back,
I guess she was feeling me too.

I offered to buy her a couple of shots,
at the bar, we sat down and drank.
Me beeing a smooth guy,
"drink not too much" I said;
She looked at me and smiled,
on the right path I was.

The music was awfully loud;
I bribed her into going outside.
Outside, we found ourselves to be;
there, I persuaded her in going into my car,
she resisted somewhat...

While sitting in the car listening to music;
I dared her to kiss me.
She resisted at first but later agreed.
That's all I needed to score;
I caressed her and kissed down her neck,
very smooth and soft, I knew she wanted more...

The moment I suspected she was under my spell;
I took my palms and placed them on her breasts.
She moaned a little, I dug for the nipples.
They were hard and ready for some good sucking
I gently sucked on them as she moaned heavier in my ears.
Oh man, she was totally enjoying herself...

My focus point was set on fcuking her;
I am sure she was awared of that too.
She did not say anything;
I took her hands and placed right down my pants,
she looked at me like she was shocked.
Maybe my dick was a little bit too big
or too small so I thought...

She said hold on, took her hands
and made a punny tale with her hair,
then took my dick and placed right into her mouth.
I was in heaven, I was getting sucked nicely.
Up and down, up and down, up and down
until my muscle became a harden rock

My dick had gotten hard,
it was my time to please her.
I opened her legs and baptized her clit with my tongue.
I was eating her out real good;
she was moaning, making all kind of sounds,
her body could not find a steady place.

Now it was my time to fcuk her;
I took her legs and placed them on my shoulders,
I opened her legs wide and got in between of them.
I began to strike her, fast and fast;
she was talking mad shyt, she turned me on.
I love a female who is pleasureable,
so I started talking back.

Who's your daddy, huh? Yeah, you like that huh
uuummmh  huh, yeah, oh yeah
I'm killing that poocee today;
"when I'm done with you,
you won't want to fcuk for another month.
I'm gonna make that poocee swell.

She took my hands and placed around her neck,
"choke me" she said, a little scary but I liked it.
I started spanking her, pulling her hair,
fcuking her from side to side;
I was having the time of my life.

I was ready to bust, I told her to suck me up;
she took my dick and placed in her mouth.
I began to melt, that shyt felt so good...
Just when I was feeling real good,
we heard a woop woop and saw red, white, and blue lights.
An officer was in the parking lot giving out tickets.

My car was in the handicap zone;
the officer came toward us with his flashlight pointed,
we were naked and the officer was at our car window.
I was melting but could not stop the cums;
he told us to step out of the car.

I was nervous but not as nervous as she was,
she was shaking like a stripper there.
Little did I know, the officer was her dad.
I could tell he was pissed off;
you should've seen his face,
he wanted to chew me off like some donuts.

"Get out of the car" he said; screaming and yelling at me.
Out of nowhere and fcuked up my night;
He gave me a stack of tickets for wrongfully parked;
and sat me in the back of his car.

All night long he had me in the back of his car.
I was cuffed up but I payed him no mind;
all I kept on thinking was that bomb shell,
whom three months later called me up
to say that she was pregnant with my child.

Now me and her dad are best friends,
but I know every time he sees my face;
he pictures me f.cking his daughter up.
As for me, every time I see his face,
I think of the man who came and messed up my night.

After that day, she saw me and smiled
Now wherever she sees me,
she'll always remember how I smacked that a.s.s









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  • z etoile
    June 26, 2008
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    I was just browsing and I clicked this one and read it again by accident. You know so there was a spelling error
    Me beeing a smooth guy, should be being.
    Thats all keep writing.

  • z etoile
    March 7, 2008

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    Ok I did not expect that ending... that was hot.. I think like I need to umm I don't know...
    But the dad... LOL that was funny.


  • Ephiphany
    November 10, 2007
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    Love the theme in this piece...

    thanks for this entry and good luck.


  • Aurielle
    November 9, 2007
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    oooo this is real sexy. Wow I loved it!!!! Nice descritive imagery.


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    November 8, 2007

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    DAAMMMNN
    What a f'n creative write!!
    What a story!!!!!!
    This is definitly a great read and totally worth a top spot in my mind!
    Thanks so much for entering
    L-R-P


  • KittieLyyn
    May 23, 2007

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    um...cool i guess...i liked this line

    I opened her legs and baptized her pussy with my tongue

    ya...not dirty pretty at all but ok.


  • cali951
    May 18, 2007

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    You be doing the most this was good but if i was her dad you would have been in jail forget a taicket lol this was good and funny at the smae time you need to stopo lol


  • poetryality silver member
    January 30, 2007
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    Bad boy (smacks hand) Bad, bad boy. I'm surprised daddy didn't do a Rodney Kings on your ass. LMAO This is quite vivid for Mom. A little editing and you may ace this one son. The best to you in this challenge.



    Mom


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 30, 2007

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    Oh what an evening this must have been! LOL Remember a similar situation in the country side at a favorite hang our spot when I was a teen. You brought that moment back with this write.

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