Sadly, it seems that for you, no good night is gentle.
Some wrong things are also true; it isn't accidental
Or even puzzling that true things can also be wrong.
Ironic, your rage is most potent at dying light
As you battle all the ghosts of a long-forgotten night
Flushing away coasts as an entertaining hooker.
A contest entry
- I want to love you. by sweetpearl.
950 points, ended February 1, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is deep. Very well written!
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"Some wrong things are also true; it isn't accidental"
and
"As you battle all the ghosts of a long-forgotten night"
--are great lines. Yay Tool. Short but written extremely well. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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