I shale kiss
your icy cold lips
closing my eyes
wishing this wasn't good-bye
you push me away
said "gomen" and walked away
I fell to my knees
thinking this was all a dream
my soul screams
while tears leave my pissed stare
cause you left me
and went to your other
playing your sick...sick games
well.. GUESS WHAT? HUNNY!
ITS GAME OVER BUDDY!
cause you got four women pregnate
but NOT me
so don't EVER come back!
cause your DEAD TO ME!!!!!!
Author notes
notes:
for anyone who don't know japanese
"gomen" means sorry....
this poem is true i had a boyfriend who cheated on me and got four other women pregnant... sigh
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.__. preagnate= Pregnant .-.
-eats some candy- >-< gomen isn't sorry, it's gomen something but your not trying to be polite so it's alright dearie. Nice and dark poem! ._. it should be an anime -thinks of an anime for it- um............. -
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thanks ^_^;; .... and yes it does the other gomen .. "gomen nasei" ((think she spelled it wrong)) means I'm sorry but its ok and thanks for the correction i thought i spelled it wrong ^_^;; anime!
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To be honest, it started out GREAT, but I was a bit disappointed w/ the ending. Seems a bit too cliche.
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thanks for your honesty ^_^ its much Appreciated
even thought the story is true...sigh i did date a guy like that
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WWWOOOOOOWWWW
you really good. I really like this one!! (y do i keep saying "really") Keep it up!...*eats donut*......
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Great!
I loved this piece I felt the same when I was cheated on so I know where your coming from I loved it alot it expressed your angry and it was a joy to read. You have great potental my friend.... USE IT!! and you will go far.
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