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s/t/r/i/k/e/m/e

No matter what I do ya know
never seems to get through ya know

Strike me!

A burning heart within my breast
serves only to char up my chest

Strike, me!

And when my eyes do close to sleep
up my toes the rot will creep

Strike-Me!

But only when my vulture cracks
to take the weight off all their backs

Strike.Me!

The ship of Ted was sinking quick
a mask slides off the bough so slick
But still the ship proceeds to tick
Although ablaze , for one more trick

St/rike/  m/e!

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  • Patroklos
    January 30, 2007
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    The images are original. You don't usually rhyme but I like that this poem does.

  • Cheetahspencer
    January 30, 2007
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    I hope you guys enjoy this one, I like it