Cream
Fresh cream mounds
With cherry nipples
Tantalizing delights
Displayed for my desire
Waffle flat stomach
Ice cream soft thighs
Edible rose petal lips
My lust’s a blazing fire
Honey drips from within
Pouring over sensitive skin
Orgasmic bliss in a fevered kiss
Our soul’s lost in a sexual abyss
A contest entry
- Just Desserts - Adult by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended February 7, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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YOU'RE REALLY MAKING ME HUNGRY!
Honey drips from within
Pouring over sensitive skin
Orgasmic bliss in a fevered kiss
Our soul’s lost in a sexual abyss
You sound like you know the taste of honey well, Sweetie - which is making me a very hungry man, indeed! This passed me hardness test hands down and there's no need to say where!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
PS -ICE CREAM with a ripe cherry on top is me favorite desert! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this fine piece! -
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Thank you Earl
i got an honourable mention for this *beams*.
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Thank you Earl i got an honourable mention for this *beams*.
ang
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Nice descriptions to build up this dessert. Certainly sexy but 'tastefully' done.
Thank you for entering and good luck
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thank you Storm
it was fun to do, am i sure it would be even better to eat! 
ang
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HA HA HA
Well done!
this is really hot... i'm surprised the icecream on the page didn't melt!
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I LOVE LOVE LOVE the last line..."Our sould lost in a sexual abyss..." wow....what a great delivery....very pleasurable.....
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Interesting
Rather subtle for you, but still its brilliant. Pity I don't have a 'Waffle flat stomach'
Good luck with the contest
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Capt
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well i had to think of deserts and well this worked!!!!! thanks for commenting ML
ang
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YUMMMMMY
Ang this is simply delicious!!
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tee hee thank you Lexie
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Your very welcome
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Good
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Thank you David
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