What does it take to break someone's heart
Break someone's spirit?
What does it take to love to much,
Hate too much,
Fight too much?
What if I love you is never enough
What if the words
Just can't come out?
What if it breaks me!
What if it shakes me?
What if I cry and cry?
Especially when you say goodbye.
With so many questions and so few answers
How do I contemplate the loss of you?
The mere memory on a heart impounded,
so dearly and devotedly.
Did you love me at all?
Tell me...tell me true.
Else your senseless play thing
will say adieu...
Beg, plead, should I stay naught?
Forgive your forgiver
but your answers are taught.
You are afraught with money
hesitation, greed.
Yet you say that
I am the one you need?
Peace be not known to you.
Stranger? Coward in my eyes?
Surely I despise,
You to me?
Me to you?
Whatever, what will...
What did I do?
But love you too much,
succeed in too few?
You will never know,
And lover?
Adieu.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow... this is an exclent poem! Great Job!! Very beautiful!
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A very beautiful piece. You've got a great flow going. I really love the wording- done very nicely, very pleasing to read. You've very nicely worded a piece about kicking someone to the curb, basically. That takes grace. Great work.


