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Insomnia

Missing image
strangled
bedsheets betray
overwhelmed brain's fruitless
attempts to demolish living
nightmares

Author notes

Photo Credit: Nightmares By Peter
Task 2: Insomnia/Cinquain
Darkwrite Challenge 2/By alleska Jan~03/24/07 HM

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    February 2, 2008
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    Amazing....

    wow...


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 9, 2007

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    wonderful cinquain! Insomnia...what if you never sleep ...lol is this still insomnia or just someone who wasn't born to sleep?...excellent poem


  • Princessdove
    February 19, 2007
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    nice job here

  • RottenXHeartX
    February 17, 2007
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    Short and to the point!
    Insomnia is Evil. With a capital E!
    X


  • Rivkah Lynn
    February 1, 2007

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    This is a very interesting write.. I really like it. It sounds like me when trying to sleep actaully.. lol... but other than that yeah.. this is a really great write. Not sure what else to say there.

    Rivkah


  • crystalclear1000
    January 30, 2007
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    i like it!

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