Last we met was nine months ago,
When our tongues were entwined
We both knew it was a no-go,
How i now regret, missing your love so sublime...
So you had said,
That you had a boyfriend,
But we both couldn't have stayed,
Determined we were to have our minds bent...
Nine months on
My heart melts with your love stained,
With your boyfriend gone
Please don't leave me disdained...
Time and time and again
When the afternoon sun shakes the leaves,
I catch you staring at me plain,
Only to have you look away and leave...
At first my heart thought it to be cute
Up and down, so sexy were those eyes groping,
With Sunday past, could it be a fluke,
With no advance i am left hoping...
That is why this Valentines Day,
I now ask of you to decide,
Will your stare turn into a rose,
With a letter defining your love,
Will it be eternal or a dose...
A contest entry
- Valentines Day poems by Jenn-Swenson.
400 points, ended February 10, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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big thumbs up
You, my brother, have a lot of depth which doesn't come to the fore at school, thats why I enjoy your writing - hidden depths! Ok, beautiful ideas, reasonably well phrased, but just relax a little, don't try too hard with getting it to rhyme (unless that was a prerequisite for the competition) just write from the heart, edit later
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nice write i liked it keep it up
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