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Eyeless

I want to feel,
Like I am lost,
Eyeless in the dark.

I want nothing more,
Than to feel your presence,
When I reach out with expecting hands.

This feeling,
Is not reciprocated throughout our beings...
You don't want this;
To feel lost,
Eyeless in the dark.

You do not want to feel me next to you,
You do not wish to hear me breathe,
But you know as well as I do,
I am screaming inside you.

I am lost;
Eyeless in the dark.
I am blind,
I do not exist at all.

There is a lie pulled over my eyes,
It is the warm illusion of love,
It is the baffling appearance of colors in darkness.

Please tell me what you think

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  • rollingzen
    January 30, 2007
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    the last line is really beautiful