The night sets in around me
I feel my soul becoming alive
The night birds flying free
The color of the night sky
So dark and gothic
The night creatures seeming to have a wit so wry
The purple that starts as the first layer
The midnight blue that follows up to the heavens
And the shadows that reach up like a silent prayer
The shade of the night casts over me
And I fall into her arms
And relax in the stars that shine above the tree
The feeling of being in the dark, not seen
Gives me a comfort like no other
I could let go of all my emotions and scream
Nobody will hear me....
A contest entry
- Shades of Night (CONTEST) by Touchof1der.
600 points, ended February 5, 2007, 21 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The use of colors add to the imagery your words already create for the reader. Nicely done! I appreciate you taking the time and making the effort to enter my contest. Thank you and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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oh this is good you have described the colours that make up the night sky....full of imagery with such descriptive wording the picture is painted before me and i just look in awe at the beauty i see there. Brilliantly crafted and a pleasure for me to read....from start to the ending scream out as loudly as you can
hope this turns to gold ...bookmarking
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