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Thanksgiving

Thank you O Lord for giving her to me,
Thank you for opening my eyes to see,
Thank you for the snow that came yesterday,
Thank you for giving me a job with pay.

For all the things I have ever had,
Including the good ones and the bad.
For every word I have ever said,
And all the ones that are in my head.

I thank you for this pen to write,
And for the sunset every night.
The music that you gave to me,
My hands, my heart, my jubilee.

I thank you for the struggles,
For a betrothed who snuggles,
For time we spent together,
For times we have to weather.

Thank you dear God I pray,
With these kind words I say,
From the pit of my heart,
How truly great thou art.

I have nothing to give you
Of equal worth that is true,
My faithful dedication
I give no hesitation.

Thank you for the love you gave us
And for the strength you gave us.
To endure this long time apart,
And giving us both a new heart.

For the technology to see her,
Even if she can look like a blur,
For the chance to hear her voice tonight,
To see her pretty eyes shine with light.

Thank you O Lord for everything you've done.
Thank you for showing me she is the one.
Thank you for allowing us to be wed.
Thank you for preparing our bridal bed.

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Please tell me what you think, I'm not really sure if it makes any sense to anyone but me, but hey, it's what happens when I get bored in class.

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  • January 30, 2007
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    I love it! And yes, it did cheer me up!