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Solitude in Silence

A wave of new pain
Gained from detachment and shame,
Icy cold parts, unrefined, from the past
Proves that memories will last.

Heartless souls entwined in fate
In Limbo of those pearly gates,
Remorse in full, escape is bound,
No release tonight is to be found.

And whilst the bitter bright shards
PIerce again this black heart,
No solitude in silence remains.

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  • Delicate Jaded
    May 2, 2007

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    Heh

    I say heh because I'd forgotten the old ways we both would write and that just brought it all flooding back to me. A great come back!
    We should collaborate again.