smirnoff stickers covered up the polaroids
of us little blond-haired babies
in leotards
and tiaras.
Little does anyone know,
I still try to put them on
every.single.night.
I try to shrink back down
every.single.moment
of my life.
&
I'm just so
FUCKING sick
of hearing about "hollywood"
and what all the glitter does to your soul.
I fell asleep;
my head between his knees.
And oh, how I fell to mine
at just the sound of a zipper
going south.
.........
Author notes
hope it's okay.... =]
-crash
In a list
A contest entry
- Glitter Queens & Nicoteen by E t e r n i t y.
650 points, ended March 5, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only for "A Broken Group Of People" "Glitter Glam Whores" "A Glitter Scarred Mascara Teared Group" And those on my favorites or who have me on their favorites by Dead Star--x.
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oooooo my favorite one yet by you crash! i like this one bunches... just made my finalists list x]
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oooh, YAY! =]]
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Hmmm, this is cool. Its very, like it gives me a specific image. Like all these blonde girls in a car driving on the open road to hollywood, ready to sell their souls and their dreams and everything they have to be glam rock queens. But then it sends me this message below all that, of sad addicitive lonely love thats just wandering in starlight and not even real anymore. I like it a lot, its true and glittery and everything.
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wow, wonderful comment [but you give this piece a much more poetic, pretty picture than it deserves ]
thanks
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with No More
toxic temptations of sugary scents
filling my wounds.
grr know the feeling. Had all new focus on diet today and someone gave me cookies! COOKIES! grr
phew
hehe but it is a great piece
you are poem perfection
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hahah, cookies are shmexy until devoured.
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girl.
do you have any idea how [::amazing::] you are????
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the first part all the way up the zipper going south is its own outstanding thing. The stickers on the polaroids of the baby pictúres just rips my heart out.
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thank you!
yeah, I'm not really sure about the rest of it... it's sortof just rambles =\
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Amazing!!
I loved it!! great write, lots of emotion, as always!
Fave part:
smirnoff stickers covered up the polaroids
of us little blond-haired babies
in leotards
and tiaras.
Little does anyone know,
I still try to put them on
every.single.night.
Simply BRILLIANT!!
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thanks molz!!
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I'm just so
FUCKING sick
of hearing about "hollywood"
and what all the glitter does to your soul.
Damn girl. This was fantastic.
That line was completely the opposite of glamour
and I love it :hug you are too awesome.
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love you lollyPOP! =] ♥
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