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Prayer Tonight

"Hold me in your arms,
Never let me go
I want to spend
Eternity with you"

Take me from this world
Never bring me back
In your heart is
Where I want to stay

Wipe the tears from my face
Softly one by one
By your side is
Where I want to be

Whisper of your love
Mend my broken soul
Accept me as your own
All I need is you

Hold me in your arms
Take me from this world
Wipe the tears from my face
And whisper of your love

Author notes

The " "'d parts are from a song called "Now that You're Near." They stuck out to me the other night...
It's a prayer to Jesus...yupyup

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  • Comes to Cross
    January 30, 2007

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    Jesus IS cooler than you!

    Great poem, I liked it. And you have a broken soul? interesting. I like how you used arms as your sign of protection. The word love appeared so many times throughout the poem. Great write. and yes, Jesus IS cooler than you.