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Dakota...

I really like him
but does he like me?
he means so much to my heart,
its not even hard to see.
I cant stop looking at him
and i dont know why!
every time i look up
i see his face in the sky.
He is always stuck in  my mind
and i never want him out.
Cause i always dream about him
and its never a doubt.
I cant stop writing poetry about him
and songs about him too
Some characters in my stories are meant to be him
But only i change their name so he has no clue
I like him too much for him to disappear
even though he has a girlfriend
i will never stop liking him
or just stay as his friend




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  • Martha Laura
    January 30, 2007

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    i feel the same way about this guy... it's a nice poem, btw... i'm touched!

    more, more, more!

    lotsa cheers,
    -martha laura-