Ere still waters o’er the earth did lie,
Ere ever life was seen;
Within the endless depths of space
Creation’s voice did trumpet;
And every star did turn its face
To gaze upon Creation’s form;
And every star did stand amazed
To listen to Creation’s voice.
Ere time begin, when the world
In fitful slumber lay;
Awaken from the dream and
Shake off your weary chains!
And every star did turn its face
To gaze upon Creation’s form;
And every star did dance amazed
To get a glimpse of Creation’s face.
Ere still waters o’er the earth did lie,
Ere ever life was seen,
There amongst the endless depths of space was
Creation’s far-off heavenly abode;
Within the stars, within the planets,
Within every sound and sight and moment,
Creation lied in wait, ere ever man was born.
Please tell me what you think
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Extraordinaire!!
Poetry about creation makes me rejoice you would not believe!!! Can you imagine being right there right then with God when he was using his finger to create atoms, molecules, ions, light in the firmament, density and gravity for the stars to hang up, temperature, moist, all you could hear maybe was the flapping of wings
) oufff!! I am like a little kid when i think about all that incredible creative talents of God!!! Love these lines -
And every star did turn its face
To gaze upon Creation’s form;
And every star did dance amazed
To get a glimpse of Creation’s face.
OUfff - To be there for a sec and see the inimitable genius of God at work - anytime!!! You made my week poet - and i am an addict of physics also - Much Love(xx)
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thank you so much for your comment! i know just the thought of it is like...wow!
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wow this was an awesome write for such a young lady you have a lot of talent my friend and your way with words is beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your comment
It's appreciated so much!
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I totally enjoyed the poem but I'm not sure you used the word ever properly. It seems that the word should have been every. But i got the message in the poem.
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I knew somethin didn't sound totally right but I wasn't sure...that may be it. Thanks a lot for your comment!
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This ain't bad, but it is different from what I usually write...lots different...
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