I had to give in to though's sexual urges
It purges
And surges
Like bugs beneath my skin
Walking into light
Then back to darkness again
What is this feeling that seeps inside
Twisting and twirling
There's no place to hide
Run for cover
Or brake down and cry
There is nothing left
So I end with Why?
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Wonderful piece.
Like bugs beneath my skin
Walking into light
thank you so much for entering. -
wonderful write.
"Twisting and twirling
There's no place to hide
Run for cover
Or brake down and cry"
my favorite part. But last line in this part I believe you mean "break" -
A simple yet great description of the urge that creeps within us all.
Nice job. -
wow i liked this alot. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
wow thats all i can say is just wow
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incredibly recently I have felt this way... Not only is this understandable to me, but I think many can relate to this... I guess the only thing I can add to this ... is something thats been said to me recently.."sex changes everything" Unfortunately some learn this at a very agonizing expense of the heart.. I do hope all is well .. and thank you very much for your entry
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Very understandable, overbearing emotions described here, I must definately agree! I've felt this way most recently, actually!
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